Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please tell about the last time you had a good chance on something.
Last weekend, I bought a bag. Because favorite brand is on sale.
Therefore, I bought it at a 50 percent discount.
강사 첨삭
That was a good deal, Emily! I hope you are satisfied. See you!-Faith-
Please tell about the last time you had a good chance on something.>> CORRECT
Last weekend, I bought a bag. Because favorite brand is on sale.
>> Last weekend, I bought a bag because my favorite brand was on sale.
Therefore, I bought it at a 50 percent discount.
Therefore, I bought it at a 50 percent discount.
>> CORRECT
OR Therefore, I got a discount of 50 percent.
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