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What did you watch on TV when you were a child?
>> Correct.
When I was a child, I liked to watch Korean
children\'s programs.
>> I enjoyed watching Korean children\'s program when I was young.
Among many children\'s programs, Pororo was the most famous program in Korea, and I loved it.
>> Pororo was the most well-known children\'s show in Korea among many others, and I adored it.
Because all the characters were
animals and they were very cute and funny.
>> The characters were all animals, and they were all really
humorous and cute.
Where in the house is your TV located?
>> Correct.
We don’t have a TV because my family didn’t buy a
TV.
>> My family chose not to buy a TV.
But if we bought a TV, I guess it was installed on the floor.
>> But if we did get a TV, I assume it was set up on the floor.
Our house has a floor and a kitchen,
>> Our house has one floor and a kitchen.
Or >> We lived in a one-story house with a kitchen.
and there are three refrigerators and a desk on the floor next to the kitchen.
>> There are three refrigerators and a desk next to the kitchen.
And if my family bought a TV, we would put it on the desk.
>> Moreover, if my family purchased a TV, it would be placed on the desk.
Because it is the best place in my house to put a TV.
>> Because it is the best place to put a TV in my home.
Do the members of your family always fight over
the remote control?
>> Correct.
We don’t fight to take a remote control for the
first because we didn’t buy a TV.
>> Since we don’t have a TV, we don\'t fight over who gets to take the remote control first.
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