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2022-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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What did you watch on TV when you were a child? When I was a child, I liked to watch Korean children\'s programs. Among many children\'s programs, Pororo was the most famous program in Korea, and I loved it. Because all the characters were animals and they were very cute and funny. Where in the house is your TV located? We don’t have a TV because my family didn’t buy a TV. But if we bought a TV, I guess it was installed on the floor. Our house has a floor and a kitchen, and there are three refrigerators and a desk on the floor next to the kitchen. And if my family bought a TV, we would put it on the desk. Because it is the best place in my house to put a TV. Do the members of your family always fight over the remote control? We don’t fight to take a remote control for the first because we didn’t buy a TV.

강사 첨삭

Hi Se [이름]! 

 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts regarding this topic. See you in class later! 

 

- Kristine ^^ 

 

What did you watch on TV when you were a child?

>> Correct.
When I was a child, I liked to watch Korean children\'s programs.

>> I enjoyed watching Korean children\'s program when I was young.

Among many children\'s programs, Pororo was the most famous program in Korea, and I loved it.

>> Pororo was the most well-known children\'s show in Korea among many others, and I adored it.

Because all the characters were animals and they were very cute and funny.
>> The characters were all animals, and they were all really humorous and cute.


Where in the house is your TV located?

>> Correct.
We don’t have a TV because my family didn’t buy a TV.

>> My family chose not to buy a TV.

But if we bought a TV, I guess it was installed on the floor.

>> But if we did get a TV, I assume it was set up on the floor.

Our house has a floor and a kitchen,

>> Our house has one floor and a kitchen.

Or >> We lived in a one-story house with a kitchen.

and there are three refrigerators and a desk on the floor next to the kitchen.

>> There are three refrigerators and a desk next to the kitchen.

And if my family bought a TV, we would put it on the desk.

>> Moreover, if my family purchased a TV, it would be placed on the desk.

Because it is the best place in my house to put a TV.

>> Because it is the best place to put a TV in my home.

Do the members of your family always fight over the remote control?

>> Correct.
We don’t fight to take a remote control for the first because we didn’t buy a TV.

>> Since we don’t have a TV, we don\'t fight over who gets to take the remote control first.


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