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I wish I could exercise more. It’s because I don’t have time to do exercise. I like exercising with someone. However, nowadays my days are full of many other schedules, so I can’t enjoy exercise. My friends don’t have their time either, so I don’t have someone who exercising together. I think the reason why people not exercise is there are so many interesting things to alternate exercise. They play phone games, watch youtube, and so on.
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Hi Bella!
You have written this well.
You are always full of ideas.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wish I could exercise more.
>> Correct
It’s because I don’t have time to do exercise.
>> Correct
I like exercising with someone.
>> Correct
However, nowadays my days are full of many other schedules, so I can’t enjoy exercise.
>> However, nowadays, my days are full of activities, so I can’t enjoy exercise.
My friends don’t have their time either, so I don’t have someone who exercising together.
>> My friends don’t have time either, so I don’t have someone who can exercise with me.
I think the reason why people not exercise is there are so many interesting things to alternate exercise.
>> I think the reason why people do not exercise is that there are so many interesting things aside from exercise.
They play phone games, watch youtube, and so on.
>> They play phone games, watch YouTube, and so on.
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