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What is success for you? Do you think you are already successful now?
I think successful life is doing want to thing. Although not only job but also eating and playing.
I think my life is half success. If I move a job, It would be a perfect success
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Hi, Emily! I also hope and pray that you can find a new job. I would like to apologize if I could not call you earlier. I had an unexpected internet connection situation. See you tomorrow. Stay safe!-Faith-
What is success for you? Do you think you are already successful now?>> CORRECT
I think successful life is doing want to thing.
>> I think a successful life is doing what I want.
Although not only job but also eating and playing.
>> Although not only about jobs, but also about the foods and activities I like.
I think my life is half success.
I think my life is half success.
>> CORRECT
If I move a job, It would be a perfect success
>> If I move to a new job, it will be a perfect success.
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