Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have many disasters in your country which are caused by weather?
20 years ago, When I was young, I often didn\'t go to school because of flood. So I went to church to meet my friends. At that time, I remember that the rain raised to my lap. Sometimes, I felt terrified when I watched the river flooding.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you\'ve mentioned that natural disasters are terrifying.
-T. Caitlyn
20 years ago, When I was young, I often didn\'t go to school because of flood. >>20 years ago when I was young, I often didn\'t go to school because of floods.
So I went to church to meet my friends.
>>CORRECT.
At that time, I remember that the rain raised to my lap.
>>At that time, I remember that the flood reached my thighs.
Sometimes, I felt terrified when I watched the river flooding.
>>Sometimes, I feel terrified when I watched the river overflowing.
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