Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever been to a family reunion? How was it?
I have been to a family reunion. It is very different between when I go to my parents in law and my parents. I want to talk about going to my parents gathering. At first, my older sisters are very friendly and often smiling. And they like to talk about anyone\'s good things. So I wish I were living nearby from their\'s house. Sometime, we are going to trip to another country. I am waiting for that time already.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It\'s nice to know how family reunions are in Korea and I find it nice that your sister likes to positively about other people. This can make people comfortable during gatherings.
-T. Caitlyn
I have been to a family reunion. >>CORRECT.
It is very different between when I go to my parents in law and my parents.
>>It is very different when I go to my parents-in-law and my parents.
I want to talk about going to my parents gathering.
>>I want to talk about going to my parents\' gathering.
At first, my older sisters are very friendly and often smiling.
>>During the gathering, my older sisters are very friendly and often smiled.
And they like to talk about anyone\'s good things.
>>They like to talk positively about other people.
So I wish I were living nearby from their\'s house.
>>I wish I was living near their house.
Sometime, we are going to trip to another country.
>>We are planning to go on a trip to another country.
I am waiting for that time already.
>>I am looking forward to it.
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