Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I have asked from other people to give them a hand. When my friends didn’t know about their homework then they called me and ask about that. Other people ask me to give them help, but I ask them to give a hand more that my friends. I need time to understand something new that I learned. Therefore, I need help, when I learned something new. After that, then I can understand all thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
This is it!
This is a good holiday for you.
I hope you can make some good memories.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes. I have asked from other people to give them a hand.
>> People have asked me to give them a hand.
When my friends didn’t know about their homework then they called me and ask about that.
>> When my friends don\'t know something about their homework, they call me and ask about that.
Other people ask me to give them help, but I ask them to give a hand more that my friends.
>> Other people ask me to help them and I also ask them to give me a hand.
I need time to understand something new that I learned.
>> I need time to understand something new that I learn.
Therefore, I need help, when I learned something new.
>> Therefore, I need help when I have to learn something new.
After that, then I can understand all thing.
>> After that, I can understand everything.
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