homework
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Have you ever bought anything
online?
>> Correct.
I bought many items in online site.
>> I bought many items online.
The first thing that I bought was the magic tool because I was interested in magic a lot.
>> The first item that I bought was a magic tool because I was very interested in magic.
And there is a famous shopping site named Amazon, so when I want to buy something, I buy in this website.
>> Amazon is a well-known
shopping website. I always use Amazon when I want to buy something.
Do you set a spending limit when you go shopping?
>> Correct.
I don’t set a spending limit when I go shopping
because I don’t go to shopping mole a lot.
>> I don’t set a spending limit when I go shopping because I rarely go to shopping malls.
I don\'t have much interest in shopping, so when I shop, I just buy that I want and I don’t look around.
>> I’m not interested in
shopping. I just buy what I’m looking for.
Do you compare prices when you go shopping?
>> Correct.
I always compare prices when I buy something.
>> Correct.
Or >> I always do a pricing comparison when buying a product
When I go shopping, price comes before quality.
>> When I shop, I prioritize price over quality.
And I don’t want to spend my money to buy a high-quality item.
>> I don’t want to spend my money buying on high-quality items.
So when I shop, I always trying to compare the prices.
>> So I always compare prices when I shop.
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