Homework
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I like stay at my home on holiday. It’s because holiday can be good rest to me. I have time to rest ordinarily, too. However on holidays I can spend my time in whole day. Therefore, I like to stay at my home on holiday. Actually, my family don’t have any travelling plan, either. However, I like to go somewhere in Christmas. Because I like Christmas mood so much. When I take a walk I can feel Christmas.
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I like stay at my home on holiday.
>> I like staying at home on holidays.
It’s because holiday can be good rest to me.
>> It’s because holidays are a good time for me to rest.
I have time to rest ordinarily, too.
>> I need some time to rest, too.
However on holidays I can spend my time in whole day.
>> However, on holidays, I can spend the whole time for myself.
Therefore, I like to stay at my home on holiday.
>> Therefore, I like staying at home on holidays.
Actually, my family don’t have any travelling plan, either.
>> Actually, my family doesn\'t have travel plans, too.
However, I like to go somewhere in Christmas.
>> However, I like to go somewhere on Christmas.
Because I like Christmas mood so much.
>> It\'s because I like the Christmas atmosphere so much.
When I take a walk I can feel Christmas.
>> When I take a walk, I can feel the Christmas spirit.
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