Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think knowing a lots of information isn’t important today. It’s because we can search very quickly that we don’t know. Knowing a lots of information is more useful in our life. However, we always having our phones so it isn’t uncomfortable to us. Actually we can search that we don’t know only about 20 seconds. Therefore, todays knowing a lots of information isn’t important todays, cause we can search it very fast.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
Let\'s work on the use of prepositions and articles.
I know it could be quite confusing.
However, I know you\'re up to the challenge.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think knowing a lots of information isn’t important today.
>> I think having a lot of information isn’t important today.
It’s because we can search very quickly that we don’t know.
>> It’s because we can search something we don\'t know very quickly.
Knowing a lots of information is more useful in our life.
>> Having a lot of information is more useful in our life.
However, we always having our phones so it isn’t uncomfortable to us.
>> However, we always have our phones so it\'s uncomfortable for us.
Actually we can search that we don’t know only about 20 seconds.
>> Actually, we can search what we don’t know for only about 20 seconds.
Therefore, todays knowing a lots of information isn’t important todays, cause we can search it very fast.
>> Therefore, having a lot of information isn’t important nowadays because we can search for it very fast.
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