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2022-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

학생이 쓴 원문

Examiner: Good morning. My name is [Name]. Could you tell me your name please? Examinee: It’s Se[이름], [이름] Examiner: Thank you. Let’s start by telling me a little something about your hometown. Examinee: My hometown is Seoul and it’s capital of Korea, so my hometown is very famous and this city is well developed. Examiner: What are some of the most interesting places there? Examinee: I think the most interesting place is Gangnam. Because there are many festivals and there are variety things to enjoy. Examiner: If I were to visit your hometown, what places could you recommend? Examinee: If you visit Seoul, I will recommend visit Gyeongbokgoong. Because it’s the biggest traditional castle in Korea. Examiner: What’s the weather like in your hometown? Examinee: The weather is different every day. Someday, it’s shine but someday, it’s raining. Examiner: I see. Thank you for that. Now, I would like to ask you about your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters? Examinee: Yes. I have o

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, Se [이름]!

 

It seems that you’re practicing very hard for your exam. You\'re doing good but keep working hard to ace the test! Have a great day ahead!

 

-Kristine ^^

 

Examiner: Good morning. My name is [Name]. Could you tell me your name please?
Examinee: It’s Se[이름], [이름]

>> Correct.

Or >> I’m Se[이름], [이름].
Examiner: Thank you. Let’s start by telling me a little something about your hometown.
Examinee: My hometown is Seoul and it’s capital of Korea,

>> My hometown is in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea.

so my hometown is very famous and this city is well developed.

>> My hometown is well-known and developed city.
Examiner: What are some of the most interesting places there?
Examinee: I think the most interesting place is Gangnam.

>> I think the most interesting place in my hometown is Gangnam.

Because there are many festivals and there are variety things to enjoy.

>> Because there are many festivals and a wide range of enjoyable activities to do there.
Examiner: If I were to visit your hometown, what places could you recommend?
Examinee: If you visit Seoul, I will recommend visit Gyeongbokgoong.

>> If you\'re heading to Seoul, I recommend you go to Gyeongbokgoong.

Because it’s the biggest traditional castle in Korea.

>> Because the largest traditional castle in Korea is located in Gyeongbokgoong..
Examiner: What’s the weather like in your hometown?
Examinee: The weather is different every day.

>> The weather changes every day.

Someday, it’s shine but someday, it’s raining.

>> It can rain or be sunny at times.

Examiner: I see. Thank you for that. Now, I would like to ask you about your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
Examinee: Yes. I have o

>> Yes, I have siblings. 

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