homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Se [이름]!
It seems that you’re practicing very hard for your exam. You\'re doing good but keep working hard to ace the test! Have a great day ahead!
-Kristine ^^
Examiner: Good morning. My name
is [Name]. Could you tell me your name please?
Examinee: It’s Se[이름], [이름]
>> Correct.
Or >> I’m Se[이름], [이름].
Examiner: Thank you. Let’s start by telling me a little something about your
hometown.
Examinee: My hometown is Seoul and it’s capital of Korea,
>> My hometown is in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea.
so my hometown is very famous and this city is well developed.
>> My hometown is well-known
and developed city.
Examiner: What are some of the most interesting places there?
Examinee: I think the most interesting place is Gangnam.
>> I think the most interesting place in my hometown is Gangnam.
Because there are many festivals and there are variety things to enjoy.
>> Because there are many
festivals and a wide range of enjoyable activities to do there.
Examiner: If I were to visit your hometown, what places could you recommend?
Examinee: If you visit Seoul, I will recommend visit Gyeongbokgoong.
>> If you\'re heading to Seoul, I recommend you go to Gyeongbokgoong.
Because it’s the biggest traditional castle in Korea.
>> Because the largest
traditional castle in Korea is located in Gyeongbokgoong..
Examiner: What’s the weather like in your hometown?
Examinee: The weather is different every day.
>> The weather changes every day.
Someday, it’s shine but someday, it’s raining.
>> It can rain or be sunny at times.
Examiner: I see. Thank you for
that. Now, I would like to ask you about your family. Do you have any brothers
or sisters?
Examinee: Yes. I have o
>> Yes, I have siblings.
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