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2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, Ms. [Name]! Unexpectedly, this homework is difficult! I feel limited myself about my English level, anyway here is my homework. Sue : Hi, Jane. Have you had an (interesting) day? Jane: I've had a very (exciting) day. It's my birthday today. Sue : I'm a little (confused). I thought your birthday was next month. Jane: No, that's my brother's birthday. Mine is today. Sue : Oh! Now I'm (embarrassing). I didn't get you a present. Jane: That's (disappointed). But it's OK. Sue : Now I'm (depressed), too. Hey, I've just had a (fascinating) idea. Why don't we go shopping and get you a present right now? That way we can get you something really (pleased). Jane: What an (enchanting) idea. Where shall we start? Sue : What about right here? Thank you so much, Ma'am Jane!

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Hi there, Sir Steve! Thank you for your composition today. You did a great job in answering your homework! Keep up the good work! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Hello, Ms. [Name]!>> Correct.Unexpectedly, this homework is difficult!>> As expected, this homework is difficult.I feel limited myself about my English level, anyway here is my homework. >> I feel that I have limited skill in English. Anyway, here is my homework.Sue : Hi, Jane. Have you had an (interesting) day? >>Correct.Jane: I\'ve had a very (exciting) day. It\'s my birthday today. >> Correct.Sue : I\'m a little (confused). I thought your birthday was next month. >> Correct.Jane: No, that\'s my brother\'s birthday. Mine is today.>> Correct.Sue : Oh! Now I\'m (embarrassing). I didn\'t get you a present. >> Oh! Now I\'m (embarrassed). I didn\'t get you a present.Jane: That\'s (disappointed). But it\'s OK. >> That\'s (disappointing). But it\'s OK.Sue : Now I\'m (depressed), too. Hey, I\'ve just had a (fascinating) idea.>> Correct.Why don\'t we go shopping and get you a present right now? That way we can get you something really (pleased).>> Why don\'t we go shopping and get you a present right now? That way we can get you something really (pleasing).Jane: What an (enchanting) idea. Where shall we start? >> Correct.Sue : What about right here?>> Correct.Thank you so much, Ma\'am Jane! >> Correct.

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