Homework
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What extracurricular activity you wish you joined when you were in school?
When I was in elementary school, I wanted to join the choir. But I transferred a lot and didn\'t allowed new members there. So I couldn\'t join the choir. Therefore I felt sad.
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Good morning, Emily! I wish you were able to join, too. However, I still admire you because until now, you are still learning the piano.-Faith-
What extracurricular activity you wish you joined when you were in school?>> CORRECT
When I was in elementary school, I wanted to join the choir.
>> When I was in elementary school, I wanted to join a choir.
But I transferred a lot and didn\'t allowed new members there. So I couldn\'t join the choir.
>> However, I transferred many times and they didn\'t allow new members there, so I could not join a choir.
Therefore I felt sad.
>> Therefore, I felt sad.
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