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The answer\'s range for this question is too huge.
Therefore, I limited the range of answers as a place. General market.
Among my experiences, the most expensive thing in the market is shine Muscat.
This grape is about 5~6times more expensive than general grape.
Even though the price is very high, people often buy this, because of sweetness and fruit juice.
I often buy this grape for my children, they are grape killers.
And I sometimes give this grape to someone as for present.
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Hi, Ji [이름]! You nicely described this fruit and it is commendable. I hope I can try it soon!-Faith-
The answer\'s range for this question is too huge.>> The answer\'s range for this question is too huge.
Therefore, I limited the range of answers as a place. General market.
>> Therefore, I limited the range of my answer to a place which is general market.
Among my experiences, the most expensive thing in the market is shine Muscat.
Among my experiences, the most expensive thing in the market is shine Muscat.
>> Among my experiences, the most expensive thing in the market is shine muscat.
This grape is about 5~6times more expensive than general grape.
This grape is about 5~6times more expensive than general grape.
>> This grape is about five to six times more expensive than most grapes.
Even though the price is very high, people often buy this, because of sweetness and fruit juice.
Even though the price is very high, people often buy this, because of sweetness and fruit juice.
>> Even though the price is very high, people often buy this because of its sweetness and juice.
I often buy this grape for my children, they are grape killers.
I often buy this grape for my children, they are grape killers.
>> I often buy this grape for my children because they are grape addicts.
And I sometimes give this grape to someone as for present.
And I sometimes give this grape to someone as for present.
>> Also, I sometimes give this grape to someone as a present.
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