Homework~~

2022-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Good morning Teacher ~~How\'s the weather in your country? I think fall is around corner. Actually, I want to study with you today. But my manager called me. I guess there might has gotten a problem between teachers. what do you do when you have trouble sleeping? I don\'t try to sleep earlier. Instead lying on the bed. I get up and reading books or study English using Youtube channel. Good bye teacher~~

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework. I agree! I also do the same thing when I\'m not sleepy because if I force myself to sleep, I develop a headache.

-T. Caitlyn

How\'s the weather in your country?

>> CORRECT

I think fall is around corner.

>> I think fall is around the corner.
Actually, I want to study with you today. But my manager called me.

>> Actually, I want to study with you today but my manager called me.

I guess there might has gotten a problem between teachers.

>> I guess there might be a problem with the teachers.
what do you do when you have trouble sleeping?

>> CORRECT
I don\'t try to sleep earlier.

>> I don\'t force myself to sleep.

Instead lying on the bed. I get up and reading books or study English using Youtube channel.

>> Instead of lying in bed, I get up and read books or watch YouTube to improve my English skills.

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