Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I’m invisible, I would follow my family and friends. I’m very curious about my family and friends’ life. For example, if I’m invisible, I would follow my mom. Then I will see what does she do at her office, and what does she do when she has her time. Maybe for this happen I can understand my family and friends more easily.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You caught my attention.
Let\'s talk about it more.
I need more details.
Let\'s discuss them in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I’m invisible, I would follow my family and friends.
>> Correct
I’m very curious about my family and friends’ life.
>> Correct
For example, if I’m invisible, I would follow my mom.
>> Correct
Then I will see what does she do at her office, and what does she do when she has her time.
>> Then I would be able to see what she does at her office and in her own time.
Maybe for this happen I can understand my family and friends more easily.
>> Maybe if this happens, I can understand my family and friends more easily.
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