Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Use the following words in creative sentences:
1. challenging
2. difficult
3. passion
4. fulfillment
5. simultaneously
1. Resource depletion is a challenging concern with regard to fossil fuels.
2. Wireless telecommunication devices allow us to have conversations over long distance that was regarded as a difficult thing.
3. Passion without action is empty, Action without passion is blind.
4. Making a fulfillment after a contraction, is the most substantial promise in businesses.
5. Sometimes bad things happen simultaneously.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Jason! I have checked your homework, and it seems that you have made very creative sentences which I appreciate. Thank you for putting much effort in making them. Please be mindful of your punctuations and capitalizations in some sentences. But I did notice that your punctuations and capitalizations improved. Please continue reviewing the corrections I give. Keep it up! :)
- Teacher Raven
>> Correct. OR Resource depletion is one of the concerns with regard to fossil fuels.
2. Wireless telecommunication devices allow us to have conversations over long distance that was regarded as a difficult thing.
2. Wireless telecommunication devices allow us to have conversations over long distance that was regarded as a difficult thing.
>> Wireless telecommunication devices allow us to have long-distance conversations which was regarded as a difficult thing in the past.
3. Passion without action is empty, Action without passion is blind.
3. Passion without action is empty, Action without passion is blind.
>> Correct. OR (mind your punctuations and capitalizations) Passion without action is empty, and action without passion is blind.
4. Making a fulfillment after a contraction, is the most substantial promise in businesses.
4. Making a fulfillment after a contraction, is the most substantial promise in businesses.
>> Fulfillment after a contract approval, is the most substantial promise in businesses.
5. Sometimes bad things happen simultaneously.
5. Sometimes bad things happen simultaneously.
>> Correct.
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