homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Go upstairs. (to go)
2) Don't swim in this lake. (not/to swim)
3) Do your homework. (to do)
4) Don't play football in the yard. (not/to play)
5) Brush your teeth. (to brush)
I repaired my computer myself last week.
My computer didn't sound after it reinstalled windows.
I didn't have stereo. I needed repair my computer to enjoy music.
I searched on internet to repair.
I followed directions that I found.
It was simple, but it took 30 min for me to reinstall sound card.
Finally, I could have a sound.
But..
My computer has been slow and it was installed something that I don't know.
When I clicked any icon on the internet, many ad-browsers popped up.
I'm thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like fomer.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you once again for making a very good homework..
Job well done!
You are such a very clever woman my dear looking for the directions on the internet..^^
I commend you for a job well done..
I\'ll call you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) Go upstairs. (to go)
>>correct2) Don\'t swim in this lake. (not/to swim)
>>correct3) Do your homework. (to do)
>>correct4) Don\'t play football in the yard. (not/to play)
>>correct5) Brush your teeth. (to brush)>>correctI repaired my computer myself last week.>>correctMy computer didn\'t sound after it reinstalled windows.
>>My computer doesn\'t have any sounds after I reinstalled the windows.I didn\'t have stereo. I needed repair my computer to enjoy music.
>>I didn\'t have any speakers so I needed my computer to enjoy listening to music.I searched on internet to repair.
>>I serached on the internet on how to fix it.I followed directions that I found.
>>I followed the directions that I found.It was simple, but it took 30 min for me to reinstall sound card.
>>It was very simple but it took 30 minutes for me to reinstall the sound card.Finally, I could have a sound.
>>Finally it\'s already working!But..My computer has been slow and it was installed something that I don\'t know.
>>My computer became really slow because there were some things installed without me knowing it.When I clicked any icon on the internet, many ad-browsers popped up.
>>correctI\'m thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like fomer.
>>I\'m thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like the old one.
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