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2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Go upstairs. (to go) 2) Don't swim in this lake. (not/to swim) 3) Do your homework. (to do) 4) Don't play football in the yard. (not/to play) 5) Brush your teeth. (to brush) I repaired my computer myself last week. My computer didn't sound after it reinstalled windows. I didn't have stereo. I needed repair my computer to enjoy music. I searched on internet to repair. I followed directions that I found. It was simple, but it took 30 min for me to reinstall sound card. Finally, I could have a sound. But.. My computer has been slow and it was installed something that I don't know. When I clicked any icon on the internet, many ad-browsers popped up. I'm thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like fomer.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you once again for making a very good homework.. Job well done! You are such a very clever woman my dear looking for the directions on the internet..^^ I commend you for a job well done.. I\'ll call you again later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 1) Go upstairs. (to go) >>correct2) Don\'t swim in this lake. (not/to swim) >>correct3) Do your homework. (to do) >>correct4) Don\'t play football in the yard. (not/to play) >>correct5) Brush your teeth. (to brush)>>correctI repaired my computer myself last week.>>correctMy computer didn\'t sound after it reinstalled windows. >>My computer doesn\'t have any sounds after I reinstalled the windows.I didn\'t have stereo. I needed repair my computer to enjoy music. >>I didn\'t have any speakers so I needed my computer to enjoy listening to music.I searched on internet to repair. >>I serached on the internet on how to fix it.I followed directions that I found. >>I followed the directions that I found.It was simple, but it took 30 min for me to reinstall sound card. >>It was very simple but it took 30 minutes for me to reinstall the sound card.Finally, I could have a sound. >>Finally it\'s already working!But..My computer has been slow and it was installed something that I don\'t know. >>My computer became really slow because there were some things installed without me knowing it.When I clicked any icon on the internet, many ad-browsers popped up. >>correctI\'m thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like fomer. >>I\'m thinking of enjoying music like this or enjoying speedy computer like the old one.

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