Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever slept outside? If so, explain the situation.
Yes, I have. We like to go camping on the mountain in fall or spring. Because nature helps us relieve stress.
I feel like I get some energy when I am in the chair in the forest. The breeze , clean air and bird\'s sound make me feel free.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! This must have been a great experience for you and your family. It feels really nice to spend some time close to nature.
-T. Caitlyn
Yes, I have.
>>CORRECT
We like to go camping on the mountain in fall or spring. Because nature helps us relieve stress.
>> We like to go camping in the mountains during fall or spring because nature helps us relieve stress.
I feel like I get some energy when I am in the chair in the forest.
I feel like I get some energy when I am in the chair in the forest.
>> I feel like I gain some energy while sitting in a chair in the forest.
The breeze , clean air and bird\'s sound make me feel free.
>> The breeze, the clean air, and the sound of the birds make me feel free.
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