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I want [이름]ion to real person. I like their personality. They are always happy and have a fun with their friends. If [이름]ion is real people and he or she is my friend, then I would be very happy and funny. I think they will be very emotional, so they are good at feel the same way.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
I can see that you watch a lot of movies.
You have always been interested in stories.
I think if this were true, you would be really happy.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want [이름]ion to real person.
>> I want [이름]ions to be real people.
I like their personality.
>> Correct
They are always happy and have a fun with their friends.
>> They are always happy and they have fun with their friends.
If [이름]ion is real people and he or she is my friend, then I would be very happy and funny.
>> If [이름]ions are real people and if they could be my friends, then, I would be very happy.
I think they will be very emotional, so they are good at feel the same way.
>> I think they would be able to empathize with how I feel.
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