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2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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My anwser are : I have been fail in an examination. This is trade certiicate. When l failed in an examination, I feel disappointment myself. because i am not hard study. so this year certainly i will get certified.

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Hi there! Thank you for sending a good composition. Be careful with your articles and your prepositions. Check out the corrections I made for some of your sentences. Have a nice day! ^^, Teacher Lorraine My anwser are : I have been fail in an examination. >> My answers are: I have failed in an examination. This is trade certiicate. >>The exam is for my trade certificate. When l failed in an examination, I feel disappointment myself. >>When I fail in an examination, I feel disappointed with myself. because i am not hard study. >>Because I didn't study hard. so this year certainly i will get certified. >>So this year, I will certainly be certified.

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