Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a goal that I planned every day. If I wake up late in the morning, I can\\\'t sleep comfortable. Because I hate being lazy. The advantage of being at night owl is the I can accomplish today\\\'s goal. And my family members are sleeping so nobody can interfere to me. I can concentrate on my work or study. The more study, the more be a rich person as soon as possible.^^
강사 첨삭
Thank you, [이름]!
I really appreciate that you do your best in answering your homework. This is also correct in my case, I can do more at night because I can focus or concentrate since no one will interrupt or disturb me while working.
-T. Caitlyn
I have a goal that I planned every day.
>> CORRECT
If I wake up late in the morning, I can\\\'t sleep comfortable. Because I hate being lazy.
>> If I wake up late in the morning, I can\'t sleep comfortably because I hate being lazy.
The advantage of being at night owl is the I can accomplish today\\\'s goal.
>> The advantage of being a night owl is that I can accomplish today\'s goal.
And my family members are sleeping so nobody can interfere to me. I can concentrate on my work or study.
>> Also, my family members are sleeping at night so nobody can interfere me so I can concentrate om my work or studies.
The more study, the more be a rich person as soon as possible.^^
>> The harder I study, the faster I can become rich.
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