homework
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강사 첨삭
I know many websites and I use the website everyday.
>> I am familiar with many other websites and I often use these websites.
Especially, I use the Korean website that called Naver oftenly.
>> I often use a Korean website called Naver.
Naver is one of the popular websites in Korea and almost Koreans use this website.
>> Naver is one of the most popular websites in Korea. Most Koreans use this website.
Naver is Korean Google because we can do everything that we can do in Google.
>> Naver is like Korean Google because it has the same features.
We can read news, watch videos, buy some stuffs, dictionnary, etc.
>> We can read news, watch videos, buy some stuffs, use dictionary and etc.
So I think it offers every information,
>> So, I think it provides all the information.
So I think this sites is very useful to Koreans because it\'s all-powerful website.
>> I believe that this website is very useful to Koreans because it offers many features.
But I don\'t recommend to use this website to foreigners because this site provides Korean language only.
>> However, I don’t recommend this website to foreigners because it only supports Korean language.
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