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What can you do to protect yourself from bad luck?
Some people will meet fortuneteller. But fortunetellers don\'t know all of the future. If I protect from bad luck myself, I will think positively And I will effort to live a healthy and safe life.
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We are on the same page, Emily! We should make an effort if we want a promising future. Have a good day!-Faith-
What can you do to protect yourself from bad luck?>> CORRECT
Some people will meet fortuneteller. But fortunetellers don\'t know all of the future.
>> Some people meet fortune tellers, but fortune tellers do not really know all of our future.
If I protect from bad luck myself, I will think positively And I will effort to live a healthy and safe life.
>> If I want to protect myself from bad luck, I will think positively and I will make an effort to live a healthy and safe life.
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