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2022-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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What do you think are most people worried about these days and what advice are you likely to give them? I don\'t know the problems of adults. But I think it\'s grades if it\'s a problem for children. I think they should study hard.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jessica!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don\'t know the problems of adults.

>> CORRECT!
But I think it\'s grades if it\'s a problem for children.

>> But I think it\'s grades, if it\'s a problem, for children.
I think they should study hard.

>> CORRECT!

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