Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I haven’t my favorite day only one. I like my birthday, Chu[이름]k, and other things. Therefore I write about my favorite day closer from now. That day is Christmas! I like Christmas very much. I like Christmas’s mood and carols. I listening carols since every October. I only have good memories about Christmas. I will bake some cookies and watch many movies on this Christmas.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
We have to make sure that we always use appropriate vocabulary.
Familiarize yourself with some new words.
Idiomatic expressions can be really helpful, too.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I haven’t my favorite day only one.
>> I don\'t have only one favorite day.
I like my birthday, Chu[이름]k, and other things.
>> I like my birthday, Chu[이름]k, and other days.
Therefore I write about my favorite day closer from now.
>> Therefore, I will write about my favorite day which is very close from now.
That day is Christmas!
>> Correct
I like Christmas very much.
>> Correct
I like Christmas’s mood and carols.
>> I like the Christmas spirit and carols.
I listening carols since every October.
>> I start listening to carols in October.
I only have good memories about Christmas.
>> Correct
I will bake some cookies and watch many movies on this Christmas.
>> I will bake some cookies and watch many movies this Christmas.
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