Homework
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Why do you think people want to see fortune tellers even though their predictions are not accurate?
Because people are wonder about the future. And people believe fortuneteller. They are believe good words and be careful of bad words.
강사 첨삭
I also like your points here, Emily! I hope you can always overcome every situation in your life even though you do not go to fortune tellers.-Faith-
Why do you think people want to see fortune tellers even though their predictions are not accurate?>> CORRECT
Because people are wonder about the future.
>> People want to see fortune tellers because they wonder about the future.
And people believe fortuneteller.
>> Also, people believe in fortune tellers.
They are believe good words and be careful of bad words.
>> They believe their good words and they want to be careful with their bad words.
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