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My primary emotion is irritation. Nowadays I have a lot of happen that I feel irritation. I’m happy too, but I think I feel irritation much often. When I have a lot of homework, and my class is difficult, I think I feel irritation at that time. However I eat something sweet or tell my problem to someone, then I feel better.
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Hi Bella!
Your consistency never fails to amaze me.
Your improvement is steady.
I have no complaints whatsoever.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My primary emotion is irritation.
>> I feel irritated these days.
Nowadays I have a lot of happen that I feel irritation.
>> Nowadays, a lot of irritating things are happening.
I’m happy too, but I think I feel irritation much often.
>> I\'m happy too but I think I\'m irritated most of the time.
When I have a lot of homework, and my class is difficult, I think I feel irritation at that time.
>> I feel irritated when I have a lot of homework and my class is difficult.
However I eat something sweet or tell my problem to someone, then I feel better.
>> However, I just eat something sweet or tell my problem to someone and then I feel better.
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