HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
The primary emotion is happy.
It is important in my life.
I try to find the happy emotion even to the hard time.
It can stay balance in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You worked hard this week.
The quality of your work will improve over time.
I hope you can continue to build your confidence.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The primary emotion is happy.
>> The primary emotion I\'m feeling at the moment is happiness.
It is important in my life.
It is important in my life.
>> Correct
I try to find the happy emotion even to the hard time.
I try to find the happy emotion even to the hard time.
>> I try to find ways to be happy even during hard times.
It can stay balance in my life.
It can stay balance in my life.
>> It can help me find balance in my life.
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