Homework~~
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The possible causes for having a vice is that vice gives us some pleasure. But I think it is not good for ourselves. we can addict in doing vices. And excessive vices can destroy our relationship with our neighbors.
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The possible causes for having a vice is that vice gives us some pleasure. But I think it is not good for ourselves.
>> The possible cause for having a vice is that it gives us pleasure even though it\'s not good for us.
we can addict in doing vices. And excessive vices can destroy our relationship with our neighbors.
>> We can get addicted to our vices and excessive vices can destroy our relationship with our neighbors.
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