Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Accidents by drunk drivers are occuring many problems in our country. So we are discussing about that. The reason of drunk drivers\'s accident is that Korean are too generous for drinking culture. It is obviously criminal. Everyone have to avoid drinking when they don\'t get someone can take me home.
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Good Job, [이름]!
I agree with what you\'ve said, driving when drunk is obviously a crime especially if you can harm and cause accidents because of it. Also, even if some say that being an alcoholic is a mental illness, it does not free you from the responsibility when you did something wrong.
-T. Caitlyn
Accidents by drunk drivers are occuring many problems in our country. So we are discussing about that.
>> Accidents due to drunk driving cause a lot of occurring problems in our country so it\'s part of our discussion.
The reason of drunk drivers\'s accident is that Korean are too generous for drinking culture.
>> The reason for drunk driving accidents is that Korea is too lenient when it comes to drinking.
It is obviously criminal.
>> It is obviously a crime.
Everyone have to avoid drinking when they don\'t get someone can take me home.
>> Everyone should avoid drinking if they don\'t have someone to take them home.
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