HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
I can learn from the mistakes.
For example, my English level was gone down after I stopped to study English.
I had to keep going to study.
so eventhough I\'m tired, I try to attend my English class.
Through this experience,if I quit studying, it\'s so difficult for me when I want to start again.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I can learn from the mistakes.
>> I can learn from my mistakes.
For example, my English level was gone down after I stopped to study English.
For example, my English level was gone down after I stopped to study English.
>> For example, my English level had gone down after I stopped studying English.
I had to keep going to study.
I had to keep going to study.
>> I have to keep studying.
so eventhough I\'m tired, I try to attend my English class.
so eventhough I\'m tired, I try to attend my English class.
>> So even though I\'m tired, I will try to attend my English class.
Through this experience,if I quit studying, it\'s so difficult for me when I want to start again.
Through this experience,if I quit studying, it\'s so difficult for me when I want to start again.
>> Through this experience, if I quit studying, it would be difficult for me to start again.
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