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I recommend visiting Namsan Mountain in Seoul. Because it has a beautiful high view and I can make locks with my friends. In addition, visit Gyeongbokgung Palace that can borrow Hanbok.
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Thank you for the lovely recommendations, Rosie! ^_^ I hope to visit Korea someday~
~T.Harmony
~T.Harmony
>> CORRECT!
Because it has a beautiful high view and I can make locks with my friends.
>> Because it will offer a beautiful bird\'s eye view, and it even gave me the opportunity to create padlocks with my friends.
In addition, visit Gyeongbokgung Palace that can borrow Hanbok.
>> In addition, visit Gyeongbokgung Palace where you can wear a borrowed Hanbok, which is a traditional Korean clothing.
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