Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer traveling long distances by air plane. It’s because I can enjoy my own time. I like spend my time alone. Plane is quiet and little bit dark, so that is great place to play. In plane I watched a lot of movies, wrote diary, and drew some pictures. However, plane is cramped so just little bit uncomfortable. Also, actually I think I have not rode a train.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You did your homework well.
That\'s how you write a good composition.
You need to have enough information to form your own opinion.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I prefer traveling long distances by air plane.
>> I prefer traveling long distances by airplane.
It’s because I can enjoy my own time.
>> It’s because I can enjoy my time alone.
I like spend my time alone.
>> I like spending time alone.
Plane is quiet and little bit dark, so that is great place to play.
>> The plane is quiet and little bit dark, so that is a great place to enjoy.
In plane I watched a lot of movies, wrote diary, and drew some pictures.
>> On planes, I watch a lot of movies, write in my diary, and draw some pictures.
However, plane is cramped so just little bit uncomfortable.
>> However, the plane is cramped so I feel just a little bit uncomfortable.
Also, actually I think I have not rode a train.
>> Actually, I think I haven\'t tried riding a train.
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