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If i won dollars, I will spend to buy Seventeen Album. because I like them but I always think better spend money something else that can developing me.
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Wow~! What an amusing answer, Rosie kkk. ^^ I would also love to spend some money on SNSD\'s albums. I\'m sure you\'ll figure out where you want to invest your money into someday~ ^^
~T.Harmony
If i won dollars, I will spend to buy Seventeen Album.
>> If I were to win 100,000 dollars, I will use that money to purchase a SEVENTEEN album.
because I like them but I always think better spend money something else that can developing me.
>> As much as I am a big fan of that group, I still think it\'s better to spend all that money for my personal growth.
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