homework
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Many countries are facing the problem of an \"aging population\", meaning there will soon be more old people than young people. What problems will this cause?
If all the elderly die in the distant future, the population will decrease significantly. So the tax that young people have to pay increases.
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Hello Jessica!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
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T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If all the elderly die in the distant future, the population will decrease significantly.
>> If all the elderly die in the near future, the population will decrease significantly.
So the tax that young people have to pay increases.
>> CORRECT!
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