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I recommend my friend have to do less eating.
Because I heard that the food is in charge of a lots of part about human weight.
I had actually used this way and brought the consequences that loss weight.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful recommendation, Rosie! ^^ I\'m sure your friend will lose a lot of weight because of your suggestion. It\'s also great to know that eating less food proved to be effective for you. ^_^
~T.Harmony
I recommend my friend have to do less eating.
>> I will recommend eating in less portions to my friend.
Because I heard that the food is in charge of a lots of part about human weight.
Because I heard that the food is in charge of a lots of part about human weight.
>> Because I heard that food plays a major role in our weight.
I had actually used this way and brought the consequences that loss weight.
I had actually used this way and brought the consequences that loss weight.
>> I was able to lose weight from eating less food than the usual.
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