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HW-> If you could have three million South Korean Won, where would you like to travel alone?
To be honest, I don\'t like travel alone.
I need someone who can talk with me whole day.
Nevertheless, if I decide to go to travel alone, I want to Jeju Island in Korea.
If I am alone, I would feel safe and comfortable staying in Korea.
I want to stay the hotel in front of Jeju Sea for a week.
In there, I would order room service for my all meals.
But it is a travel alone, I will get bored right away.
I want to go to trip with my three close friends:)
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It must be relaxing and refreshing, Ji [이름]! I also want to have this kind of trip. Thank you for your nice answer.-Faith-
HW-> If you could have three million South Korean Won, where would you like to travel alone?>> If you could have three million South Korean Won, where would you like to travel alone?
To be honest, I don\'t like travel alone.
>> To be honest, I do not like to travel alone.
I need someone who can talk with me whole day.
I need someone who can talk with me whole day.
>> I need someone who can talk with me the whole day.
Nevertheless, if I decide to go to travel alone, I want to Jeju Island in Korea.
Nevertheless, if I decide to go to travel alone, I want to Jeju Island in Korea.
>> Nevertheless, if I decide to travel alone, I want to go to Jeju Island, Korea.
If I am alone, I would feel safe and comfortable staying in Korea.
If I am alone, I would feel safe and comfortable staying in Korea.
>> If I were alone, I would feel safe and comfortable staying in Korea.
I want to stay the hotel in front of Jeju Sea for a week.
I want to stay the hotel in front of Jeju Sea for a week.
>> I want to stay in a hotel in front of Jeju sea for a week.
In there, I would order room service for my all meals.
>> I would order a room service for my all meals there.
But it is a travel alone, I will get bored right away.
In there, I would order room service for my all meals.
>> I would order a room service for my all meals there.
But it is a travel alone, I will get bored right away.
>> However, if I travel alone, I will get bored right away.
I want to go to trip with my three close friends:)
I want to go to trip with my three close friends:)
>> I want to go on a trip with my three close friends.:)
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