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2012-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) go went gone 2) say said said 3) do did done 4) come came come 5) have had had 6) stand stood stood 7) make made made 8) buy bought bought 9) sit sat sat 10) swim swam swum Today is White Day. White Day is the day that a man gives a candy to women. This is the opposite of Valentine Day. I recieved a lollipop from my co-worker and users in the library. I was not glad. They were not my boyfriend. I want to recieve it from my lover. The candy that I recieve is meaningless. They gave me it as a manner. And I don't like candy. I like Chocolate and I also want to recieve it like man on Valentine Day. Anyway, people didn't recieve any candy or chocolate on either Valentine Day or White Day eat Jajang-myun on Black day. Fortunately I need not eat Jajang-myun.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy White Day! I envy you coz you received some candies today, for me? I didn\'t..kkk But anyway, I\'m really hoping that someday, someone will give you chocolates and not candies from a man that you love.. Job well done on your composition my dear, all of your answers are correct, two thumbs up for you my dear! Talk to you agian later Miss. [Name], and can\'t wait to have class with you again.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) go went gone >>correct2) say said said >>correct3) do did done >>correct4) come came come >>correct5) have had had >>correct6) stand stood stood >>correct7) make made made >>correct 8) buy bought bought >>correct9) sit sat sat >>correct10) swim swam swum>>correctToday is White Day. >>correctWhite Day is the day that a man gives a candy to women. >>correct >>White Day is a day when a man gives candy to a woman.This is the opposite of Valentine Day. >>This is the opposite of the Valentine\'s DayI recieved a lollipop from my co-worker and users in the library.>>correct I was not glad. >>correctThey were not my boyfriend. I want to recieve it from my lover. >>correctThe candy that I recieve is meaningless. >>correct They gave me it as a manner. >>They gave it to me as a respect.And I don\'t like candy. >>correct I like Chocolate and I also want to recieve it like man on Valentine Day. >>I like chocolates and I also want to receive it rfoma man on Valentine\'s Day.Anyway, people didn\'t recieve any candy or chocolate on either Valentine Day or White Day eat Jajang-myun on Black day. >>Anyway, people who didn\'t recieve any candies or chocolates on either Valentine Day or White Day will eat Jajang-myun on Black day.Fortunately I need not eat Jajang-myun. >>correct

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