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If fast-food restaurants are not healthy, then do you think the government should ban them? Why or why not?
I think government has to ban fast-food. Government has to obligate to care people.
강사 첨삭
I admire your courage to express your own opinion, Emily! I hope you always choose a healthy living.-Faith-
If fast-food restaurants are not healthy, then do you think the government should ban them? Why or why not?>> CORRECT
I think government has to ban fast-food.
<< I think the government has to ban fast food.
Government has to obligate to care people.
>> The government is obligated to care for people.
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