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Is voting an important responsibility of a citizen? Why or why not?
Voting is an important responsibility of citizen.
Because the right to vote was earned by fighting hard.
Hard-earned rights should be used.
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Good day, Do [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleIs voting an important responsibility of a citizen? Why or why not?
Voting is an important responsibility of citizen.
Voting is an important responsibility of citizen.
>> CORRECT!
Because the right to vote was earned by fighting hard.
>> It\'s because the right to vote is earned by fighting hard.
Hard-earned rights should be used.
>> CORRECT!
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