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I just cry a lot. Because I am a honest person for emotion and I think when people feel sad, they get to stress from suppress sad.
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Thank you so much for your answer, Rosie ^_^ It\'s good to let it all out instead of holding everything in because as you mentioned, it will only cause further stress. Just know that if you ever feel sad again, I am hear to listen~ ^^ Sending hugs!
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
Because I am a honest person for emotion and I think when people feel sad, they get to stress from suppress sad.
>> Because I am honest with my emotions, and I think when people try to suppress their sadness, they end up feeling stressed out.
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