Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I know my family tree only until my grand father’s mother. I live with my grand parents, so of course I know my grand parents. In our family, we hold memorial service every year. We prepare a lot of foods like fruits and some snacks. Therefore, I know my grand parent’s parents very well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
Please take note of your spelling here.
There\'s also a lesson about prepositions.
Make sure you also make a distinction between descriptions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I know my family tree only until my grand father’s mother.
>> I know my family tree only until my grandfather’s mother.
I live with my grand parents, so of course I know my grand parents.
>> I live with my grandparents, so of course I know my grandparents.
In our family, we hold memorial service every year.
>> In our family, we hold a memorial service every year.
We prepare a lot of foods like fruits and some snacks.
>> We prepare a lot of food like fruits and some snacks.
Therefore, I know my grand parent’s parents very well.
>> Therefore, I know my grandparent’s parents very well.
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