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학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like to telling and listening to jokes because if I listen to jokes I feel very bad and I don\'t like to joke to my friends because it is not fun to jokeing to friend but I like to joke to my brother because my brother always joke to me so jokeing to my brother is a revenge and it is fun to joke to my brother.
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Hi [이름]!
You are getting better now.
Try to sperate your sentences.
It would be easier to understand that way.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t like to telling and listening to jokes because if I listen to jokes I feel very bad.
>> I don\'t like to telling and listening to jokes because if I listen to jokes I feel very bad.
I don\'t like to joke to my friends because it is not fun to jokeing to friend.
>> I don\'t like to joke around with my friends because it\'s not fun.
I like to joke to my brother because my brother always joke to me so jokeing to my brother is a revenge and it is fun to joke to my brother.
>> I like to tell jokes to my brother because my brother always jokes around with me.
jokeing to my brother is a revenge and it is fun to joke to my brother.
>> Joking with my brother is a kind of revenge for me and it\'s just fun.
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