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I want to spend an entire day with Joshua of Seventeen. Cause I watch video related to him and then it makes me feel fun. So, if I meet her in reality, that day will be the most valuable in forever.
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Thank you so much for your answer, Mrs. [Name]~ kkk ^_^ I\'m sure he would love to spend a day with you as well. :D
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
Cause I watch video related to him and then it makes me feel fun.
>> Because watching a video about him had me feeling positive emotions.
So, if I meet her in reality, that day will be the most valuable in forever.
>> Hence, if I ever get to meet him in person, I would consider that day as very special for the rest of my life.
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