Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Think of a situation where optimism can save you.
A pessimist is under a lot of stress. If we live with a positive mind, we will be healthy. For example, if we think positively when we get sick, we are likely to live longer.
강사 첨삭
I couldn\'t agree more on that, Emily! Continue to cultivate optimism. See you!-Faith-
Think of a situation where optimism can save you.>> CORRECT
A pessimist is under a lot of stress.
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If we live with a positive mind, we will be healthy.
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or Positivity keeps us in shape.
For example, if we think positively when we get sick, we are likely to live longer.
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