Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
the most beautiful person in my country is my mom. Because I think beauty means one’s personality, So my mom always cheers for me and considers me her first. I had being touched at her behavior so far I never meet beautiful person than my mom.
강사 첨삭
Aww what a sweet answer, Rosie. ^_^ I\'m sure your mom would be very happy if she finds out that you chose her as the most beautiful person in Korea and possibly in the entire world! ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
>> (Just a re[이름]der~ Please don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentences. ^^)
Because I think beauty means one’s personality, So my mom always cheers for me and considers me her first.
>> Because I think beauty represents an individual\'s personality, and my mom always cheers for me and treats me like her number one.
I had being touched at her behavior so far I never meet beautiful person than my mom.
>> I have always felt touched by her behavior, so I have never met a more beautiful person than my mom.
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