Homework~~
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I was close to the guide when I went on my honeymoon. So when I had to go home, she recommended a lot of gifts for my parents-in-law. They were food for health. But one couple bought a very simple gift for them. It was a rough stone. My parents in law smiled us and they said that don\'t never buy gifts like this.^^
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s nice that you bought gifts for your parents-in-law when you went on your honeymoon.
-T. Caitlyn
I was close to the guide when I went on my honeymoon.
>> I was close with the tour guide when I went on my honeymoon.
So when I had to go home, she recommended a lot of gifts for my parents-in-law.
>> CORRECT
They were food for health. But one couple bought a very simple gift for them.
>> I bought food for their health but another couple bought a very simple gift for them.
It was a rough stone.
>> CORRECT
My parents in law smiled us and they said that don\'t never buy gifts like this.
>> My parents-in-law smiled at us and they told us never to buy gifts like this.
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