Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In your own opinion, what is the best job in your country?
Nowadays I think cafe owner is the best job. These days Korean often visit cafe. Especially big bakery cafe is the most popular place. Therefore cafe owner earns a lot of money.
강사 첨삭
Someday, you can be a cafe owner, too. Emily! I would like to thank you for your effort to finish all your homework!-Faith-
In your own opinion, what is the best job in your country?>> CORRECT
Nowadays I think cafe owner is the best job.
>> Nowadays, I think cafe owner is the best job.
These days Korean often visit cafe.
>> These days, Koreans often visit a cafe.
Especially big bakery cafe is the most popular place.
>> Most especially, big bakery cafes are the most popular places.
Therefore cafe owner earns a lot of money.
>> Therefore, cafe owners earn a lot of money.
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