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I think Korea is too narrow. So it make me bored to find new place. But sometimes I feel surprised when I visit some place I haven\'t ever been to. How come I didn\'t know about here? I know if you want to enjoy perfectly, you have to look for where to go.
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Hi, [이름]!
Happy Monday! I agree. It\'s really nice to find new places to visit, especially places that can be very relaxing.
-T. Caitlyn
I think Korea is too narrow. So it make me bored to find new place.
>> I think Korea is too small so I feel bored of not being able to find new places.
But sometimes I feel surprised when I visit some place I haven\'t ever been to.
>> But sometimes, I feel surprised when I visit a place I haven\'t ever been to.
How come I didn\'t know about here?
>> How come I didn\'t about this?
I know if you want to enjoy perfectly, you have to look for where to go.
>> If you want to enjoy yourself perfectly, you have to look for a place to go.
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